Queen Morwen of Rhun

[Morwen]

Please see below for corections

Name:Morwen
Postion:Queen of Rhun
Apperence: www.bealltool.com/romansims/images/skinpics/lucilla.jpg
Otherwise she wares a black dress with slits down the side and black pants underneath. The dress had gold arcan symbols embroidered on it.
Charecter: A Warrior, she may be a woman but her poeple respect her as a Warror and leader. Remorseless, un-pitying, avariciouse yet fair and loyal. Before she killed her uncle and sezied the Throne she worked as the Royal Assassin.

[Morwen]

The Charecter has changed so much and i'd like to rewrite this.

Name: Kalidul (‘Woman in black’ in Numoran)
Real name: Morwen
Race: Easterling
Age: Unknown, though probably late 20’s
Height: 5”9
Facial features: See banner

Cloths: A tattered and mended black long sleeved dress with slits down the side showing equally worn black trews underneath and dirty leather boots. The dress is tied with a frayed girdle also in black.
Affiliation: None
Personality: Determined and stubborn, yet loyal. She was once trusting yet now she can become confused about her past she is cynical and dose not know friend from foe.

Likes: Security
Dislikes: Trickery
Strengths: Determination. She has lost everything even her name; but she refuses to give up.
Weakness: Lost memory
Weapons: A walking stick

History: Morwen. A name that was known, feared, but respected throughout all the courts of Middle Earth. Morwen; Queen of Rhun and Dragon-friend. But no more. Now she is Kalidul. A wanderer searching for who she is; with no memory of anything in her previous life. But I jump ahead of myself: I should first explain the history of Morwen; so that you might better understand this Kalidul I speak of.

Morwen was a Princess of Rhun; not first in line to inherit that was true. But in Rhun such things did not matter. Morwen became a Royal Assassin and was partnered with another Assassin, Sereghin who she came to regard as a sister. Morwen was encouraged by the Assassins Guild of Rhun; the Tatteyen to leave the Royal pay and join them as her ‘sister’ had done. However Morwen preferred to kill her Uncle. The King at the time and take power for herself. This was a perfectly normal procedure in Rhun and no one thought anything of it. Morwen began making alliances and helping her fellow Dark Rulers in their battles against the Light; though she still thought it prudent to have Trading Alliances with some Light Nations. However; a short period into her reign it went wrong. Morwen was using Sereghin as her messenger and Head of Armies; when she discovered that the Tatteyen were in fact using Sereghin to subvert her orders. She had no choice and proceeded to personally kill the woman she thought of as a sister and hang her body in the Palace courtyard as an example to traitors and the Tatteyen.

It was now that Morwen discovered the family she had wanted; someone who would not betray her; but she found it in a Dragon. An egg brought to increase the power of her army became like her child and a Guardian to the Temple. Bamini the Golden Dragon; an intelligent and faithful if arrogant creature. Morwen resigned the Crown; staying in Rhun had become too painful so she found another dragon – friend, another dragon. Between them they brought ‘or rescued’ as the other girl put it a female egg meaning to start up a colony. However Rhun called her back to duty so she began the journey back.

On the way Morwen was lost and the woman Kalidul replaced her. Bamini was dead; nothing left to remind her of who she was. Her memories were gone, her knowledge of who she was. When she’d left the colony she’d had possessions with her; weapons, jewels found in the rocks. Therefore we can only assume that Morwen was attacked by bandits though how they overcame a dragon is something I do not know. What I do know is that what they left behind was a determined woman who wanders though the lands looking for herself. If you see Kalidul tell her what I’ve told you. It might bring her some peace, or she might kill you for being a liar; but I’ll find that entertaining all the same.

[Arwen]

Nice modification.

Seeing as this character has already been accepted- it shall be so. Not that it wouldn't be. The History is fantastic. The other feilds you have covered are also good, I especially like her strengths.

Nice work.

[Morwen]

Continued

Morwen had returned. And the knowledge of who had killed Bamini and attmepted to kill her had returned. once she has finished what she has undertaken in the North she shall return and seek her revenge upon her enemies.

(more later)